Is this correctly phrased, particularly "the mother of Steel who had" part?
Sara Dunstan, the adoptive mother of Steel who had been exiled from the Dark Knights prior to the Chaos War, infiltrated the evil military order in 386 AC to ascertain their status
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It does not make clear who had been exiled, Sara or Steel.
— Mister Micawber
It does not make clear who had been exiled, Sara or Steel.
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