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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Is this correct? Particularly the use of "thus"?
The Brotherhood was betrayed by a noble working for the fearsome green dragon Skuthosiin, and was thus unable to save a village from being destroyed by the cult. Due to their failure, the sellsword company was dismissed from their employment in Impiltur.
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The Brotherhood was betrayed by a nobleman working for the fearsome green dragon Skuthosiin, and was thus unable to save a village from destruction by the cult. For their failure, the sellsword company was dismissed from their employment in Impiltur.
- The Brotherhood was betrayed by a nobleman working for the fearsome green dragon Skuthosiin, and was thus unable to save a village from destruction by the cult.
- For their failure, the sellsword company was dismissed from their employment in Impiltur.
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The Brotherhood was betrayed by a nobleman working for the fearsome green dragon Skuthosiin, and was thus unable to save a village from destruction by the cult. For their failure, the sellsword company was dismissed from their employment in Impiltur.
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