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LeftHandedMystic Posted 7 years ago
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Is this correct Parallelism?

In our quest to learn how things move, the experience of hiking and other motion leads us to introduce the concepts of velocity, time, length, kilograms and temperature.

  

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I don't see what this has to do with "parallelism". To me the mention of "hiking" as an example of "motion" seems oddly specific and a bit strange. I suppose it could be explained by the wider context.

  • I don't see what this has to do with "parallelism".
  • To me the mention of "hiking" as an example of "motion" seems oddly specific and a bit strange.
  • I suppose it could be explained by the wider context.
  • I don't really understand what kilograms and temperature have to do with "how things move".
  • "kilograms" is mismatched with the other items in the list as it is a unit of measurement.
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I don't see what this has to do with "parallelism". To me the mention of "hiking" as an example of "motion" seems oddly specific and a bit strange. I suppose it could be explained by the wider context. I don't really understand what kilograms and temperature have to do with "how things move". "kilograms" is mismatched with the other items in the list as it is a unit of measurement. If you are

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In our quest to learn how things move, the experience of hiking and other motion leads us to introduce the concepts of velocity, time, length, kilograms and temperature.

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In our quest to learn how things move, the experience of hiking and other motion leads us to introduce the concepts of velocity, time, length, mass and temperature.

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in our quest to learn how things move, the experience of hiking and other motion leads us to introduce the concepts of velocity, time, length, kilograms and temperature.

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