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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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Is this correct grammar?? please help
THis sentence seems a bit long to me, I'm afraid it is a run on, or fragment. Any help???
The problem is threefold in that, users are unaware of the finality and consequences of their online lives, Facebook and other websites, such as Google, are selling their clients personal data for profits, and no regulations exist to help protect the online consumer from becoming the online product.
The problem is threefold in that, users are unaware of the finality and consequences of their online lives, Facebook and other websites, such as Google, are selling their clients personal data for profits, and no regulations exist to help protect the online consumer from becoming the online product.
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Hi, THis sentence seems a bit long to me, I'm afraid it is a run on, or fragment. Any help??? The problem is threefold in that, users are unaware of the finality and consequences of their online lives, Facebook and other websites, such as Google, are selling their clients personal data for profits, and no regulations exist to help protect the online consumer from becoming the online product.
- Hi, THis sentence seems a bit long to me, I'm afraid it is a run on, or fragment.
- Any help???
- The problem is threefold in that, users are unaware of the finality and consequences of their online lives, Facebook and other websites, such as Google, are selling their clients personal data for profits, and no regulations exist to help protect the online consumer from becoming the online product.
- It's not wrong, except you need to remove the comma after 'in that', and add an apostrophe after clients.
- However, it would be better to simplify it.
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Hi,
THis sentence seems a bit long to me, I'm afraid it is a run on, or fragment. Any help???
The problem is threefold in that, users are unaware of the finality and consequences of their online lives, Facebook and other websites, such as Google, are selling their clients personal data for profits, and no regulations exist to help protect the o
THis sentence seems a bit long to me, I'm afraid it is a run on, or fragment. Any help???
The problem is threefold in that, users are unaware of the finality and consequences of their online lives, Facebook and other websites, such as Google, are selling their clients personal data for profits, and no regulations exist to help protect the o
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