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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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They hesitated a long time before deciding to do an engagement session. They arrived in New York right before all the flights were cancelled and thought that the photos would be under a gray cloudy sky. But then, the blizzard came…and went, leaving behind an amazing Central Park covered in snow.

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They hesitated a long time before deciding to do an engagement session. They arrived in New York right before all the flights were cancelled and thought that the photos would be taken under a gray cloudy sky. But then, the blizzard came…and went, leaving behind an amazing Central Park covered in snow.

  • They hesitated a long time before deciding to do an engagement session.
  • They arrived in New York right before all the flights were cancelled and thought that the photos would be taken under a gray cloudy sky.
  • But then, the blizzard came…and went, leaving behind an amazing Central Park covered in snow.
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They hesitated a long time before deciding to do an engagement session. They arrived in New York right before all the flights were cancelled and thought that the photos would be taken under a gray cloudy sky. But then, the blizzard came…and went, leaving behind an amazing Central Park covered in snow.

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