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Anonymous Posted 20 years ago
Grammar

Is this correct grammar?

0 A revolution originates from a, through a reign , founded on the suppression and exploitation of the working class created mood.02br
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00 I'd be greatful if you could help me 02br
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00 I forumlated this rather comlicated sentence in a homework for english and I am not sure if its correct grammar.02br
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0Hi,02br 02br 01font 00A revolution originates from a, through a reign , founded on the suppression and exploitation of the working class created mood. 02font 02br 02br 01font 01font 00through a reign02font 00 What are you talking about here? Do you mean a period of government?

— Clive

  • 0Hi,02br 02br 01font 00A revolution originates from a, through a reign , founded on the suppression and exploitation of the working class created mood.
  • 02font 02br 02br 01font 01font 00through a reign02font 00 What are you talking about here?
  • Do you mean a period of government?
  • 02font 02br 02br 01font 01font 00created mood02font 00 This phrase does not seem to fit.
  • 02font 02br 02br 01font 00Best wishes, Clive02br 02font 0-
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0Hi,02br
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01font00A revolution originates from a, through a reign , founded on the suppression and exploitation of the working class created mood. 02br
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00I forumlated this rather comlicated sentence in a homework for english and I am not sure if its correct grammar.00 Your sentence has some serious flaws that you need
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0 ok I'll try to explain my sentence 02br
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00 A revolution originates from (a (the mood ist ment)) through a reign (political system) , founded (based) on the suppression and ex.... of the working class , created mood02br
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00 so the mood ist created through a reign which is founded (based) on the suppression and ex... of the working class an
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0Two revisions, with slightly different emphases--02br
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01font00A revolution of the working class is sparked by a suppressive and exploitative ruling class.02font02br
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01font00A regime founded on the suppression and exploitation of the working class creates the mood/climate for revoluti
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0 In English we don't use those long phrases as modifiers before the noun. We place those phrases after the noun.02br
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00 For example, in English we don't say 01i00the in the garage parked car02i00. We say 01i00the car parked in the garage02i00. We don't say 01i00the in the chair sitting girl02i00.
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0 Thank you very much !!02br
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00 I'll most certainly consider your suggestions in my next essay.02br
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00 sicerely 02br
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