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Chrismlangan Posted 19 years ago
Grammar

Is this correct gramma? Please help!

Berk finally catches Vince, who hardly puts up a fight; gets him mounted; and raises his fist before dropping it a few moments later.
  

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Chrismlangan Berk finally catches Vince, who hardly puts up a fight; gets him mounted; and raises his fist before dropping it a few moments later. Your semicolons should be replaced by commas, and many would omit the last one altogether. Some would also argue that it is simply too much action for one sentence.

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  • Chrismlangan Berk finally catches Vince, who hardly puts up a fight; gets him mounted; and raises his fist before dropping it a few moments later.
  • Your semicolons should be replaced by commas, and many would omit the last one altogether.
  • Some would also argue that it is simply too much action for one sentence.
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Chrismlangan
Berk finally catches Vince, who hardly puts up a fight; gets him mounted; and raises his fist before dropping it a few moments later.

Your semicolons should be replaced by commas, and many would omit the last one altogether.

Some would also argue that it is simply
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Some would also argue that it is simply too much action for one sentence.
I might be among them.

But what do you mean by "gets him mounted"?
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Grammar Geek
Some would also argue that it is simply too much action for one sentence.
I might be among them.

But what do you mean by "gets him mounted"?
I was afraid to ask
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