Is this correct? Could it be better?
Hey. Is the below written/phrased in a natural way? Could it be written better?
Bully: So tell me, how would a girl like her ever fall for an ugly, skinny guy like you?
Struggling to come up with a verbal response to that, Glen instead takes a big swing at the bully.
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It's OK. Note that context, body language, facial expression, etc are all very important. In this case, you have told us that the person is a bully.
- It's OK.
- Note that context, body language, facial expression, etc are all very important.
- In this case, you have told us that the person is a bully.
- If you hadn't told us that, I'd have thought that the speaker was just trying to be funny with his friend, just kidding.
- Clive
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It's OK.
Note that context, body language, facial expression, etc are all very important. In this case, you have told us that the person is a bully. If you hadn't told us that, I'd have thought that the speaker was just trying to be funny with his friend, just kidding.
Clive
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