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Anonymous Posted 6 years ago
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Is this correct?

Hi teachers. Is this correct? If not, how would you write it?

Troy walked toward the bag, but Chris stopped him and walked over to the bag himself.

  

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Is this correct? Yes,but it could be better. Try to avoid repetition, eg by using a pronoun.

  • Is this correct?
  • Yes,but it could be better.
  • Try to avoid repetition, eg by using a pronoun.
  • Troy walked toward the bag, but Chris stopped him and walked over to it the bag himself.
  • Try to avoid repetition, eg by using a synonym.
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Is this correct? Yes,but it could be better.


Try to avoid repetition, eg by using a pronoun. Troy walked toward the bag, but Chris stopped him and walked over to it the bag himself.


Try to avoid repetition, eg by using a synonym. Troy walked toward the bag, but Chris stopped him and went over to it himself.

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