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As I looked across the room I saw several of my old friends chatting, catching up. My eyes drifted on and suddenly I spotted my old girlfriend, Joan, talking to one of her friends from back then, Liz.
Is everything correct?
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As I looked across the room I saw several of my old friends chatting and catching up. My eyes drifted on and suddenly I spotted my old girlfriend, Joan, talking to one of her friends from back then, Liz. Is everything correct?
- As I looked across the room I saw several of my old friends chatting and catching up.
- My eyes drifted on and suddenly I spotted my old girlfriend, Joan, talking to one of her friends from back then, Liz.
- Is everything correct?
- Yes.
- The 'and' makes it slightly more standard English.
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As I looked across the room I saw several of my old friends chatting and catching up. My eyes drifted on and suddenly I spotted my old girlfriend, Joan, talking to one of her friends from back then, Liz.
Is everything correct? Yes.
The 'and' makes it slightly more standard English.
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