Is this correct or could it be better?
When he got diagnosed with leukemia, they gave him a good chance of surviving it, but unfortunately he wasn't that lucky.
It's correct. I'd change 'got' to 'was'. 'got' is a little too casual for such a serious subject.
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It's correct.
I'd change 'got' to 'was'. 'got' is a little too casual for such a serious subject.
CJ