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Arevik Posted 7 years ago
Grammar

Is this correct?

Hi! I would like to know if this sentence is correct.

"I feel how tough it was for a seven year old girl to grow up without a mother who left you and your twelve year old brother to be raised by an alcoholic father."

  

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It seems a little jumbled without punctuation. "

  • It seems a little jumbled without punctuation.
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It seems a little jumbled without punctuation. I might do it like this:

"I feel how tough it was for a seven-year-old girl to grow up without a mother, who left you and your twelve-year-old brother to be raised by an alcoholic father."

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