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Anonymous Posted 7 years ago
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Is this correct?

Hi. Is this correct? Please comment.

It was now 2 a.m. and the big city had completely surrendered to the night. For a few more hours it would be possible to enjoy the silence before the noise and the rush of the city would return.

  

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That's good. " but it is acceptable. It does pull the past to a kind of current-ish moment.

  • That's good.
  • " but it is acceptable.
  • It does pull the past to a kind of current-ish moment.
  • You don't need to change it.
  • I just gave my opinion.
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That's good. Personally, I don't care for mixing past and present with "It was now..." but it is acceptable. It does pull the past to a kind of current-ish moment. You don't need to change it. I just gave my opinion.

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