That's unnatural. It works without the commas.
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AnonymousThe man, wearing a red shirt, smiled at me.thanks.A man in a red shirt smiled at me. (use "A man" when introducing him for the first time into the narrative.)
fivejedjonif you have already mentioned him.... or if he is clearly in view and uniquely identifiable in an on-going situation.