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Ayan86 Posted 10 years ago
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Please take a look at this sentence. Is it understandable and correct?

The social services requested to remove custody rights for Jane Smith’s, ID No. XXXX, mother, Sally Smith, ID No. XXXX.

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Social Services requested the removal of custody rights for Jane Smith’s (ID No. XXXX) mother, Sally Smith (ID No. XXXX).

— Mister Micawber

  • Social Services requested the removal of custody rights for Jane Smith’s (ID No.
  • XXXX) mother, Sally Smith (ID No.
  • XXXX).
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Social Services requested the removal of custody rights for Jane Smith’s (ID No. XXXX) mother, Sally Smith (ID No. XXXX).
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