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Told from Igor's perspective, we see the troubled young assistant's dark origins, his redemptive friendship with the young medical student Viktor Von Frankenstein, and become eyewitnesses to the emergence of how Frankenstein became the man - and the legend - we know today.
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Is the underlined correct?
Told from Igor's perspective, we see the troubled young assistant's dark origins, his redemptive friendship with the young medical student Viktor Von Frankenstein, and become eyewitnesses to the emergence of how Frankenstein became the man - and the legend - we know today.
Thank you
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No, that is awkward. and became eyewitnesses to how Frankenstein became... and became eyewitnesses to the emergence of Frankenstein the man and the legend -we know today.
- No, that is awkward.
- and became eyewitnesses to how Frankenstein became...
- and became eyewitnesses to the emergence of Frankenstein the man and the legend -we know today.
- I hope this helps.
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No, that is awkward. Say instead
Either:
...and became eyewitnesses to how Frankenstein became...
Or:
...and became eyewitnesses to the emergence of Frankenstein the manand the legend-we know today.
I hope this helps.
Either:
...and became eyewitnesses to how Frankenstein became...
Or:
...and became eyewitnesses to the emergence of Frankenstein the man
I hope this helps.
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