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Creativeguru Posted 10 years ago
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Allied Digital has helped many companies adopt digital transformation since three decades. We are global pioneer in Master systems Integrator
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I commented on the first sentence elsewhere. In the second sentence, "pioneer" should be "pioneers". The capitalisation looks haphazard or inconsistent.
- I commented on the first sentence elsewhere.
- In the second sentence, "pioneer" should be "pioneers".
- The capitalisation looks haphazard or inconsistent.
- I am doubtful that "pioneers in Master systems Integrator" is correct, though I do not exactly know what "Master systems Integrator" means.
- Usually you would be pioneers in some kind of integration, not pioneers in an integrator.
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I commented on the first sentence elsewhere.
In the second sentence, "pioneer" should be "pioneers". The capitalisation looks haphazard or inconsistent.
I am doubtful that "pioneers in Master systems Integrator" is correct, though I do not exactly know what "Master systems Integrator" means. Usually you would be pioneers in some kind of integration, not pioneers in an integrator.
In the second sentence, "pioneer" should be "pioneers". The capitalisation looks haphazard or inconsistent.
I am doubtful that "pioneers in Master systems Integrator" is correct, though I do not exactly know what "Master systems Integrator" means. Usually you would be pioneers in some kind of integration, not pioneers in an integrator.
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how is this:
Allied Digital is your trusted partner in adopting digital revolution backed by over 3 decades of experience in helping organizations to transform their operations leveraging on emerging IT infrastructure solutions
Allied Digital is your trusted partner in adopting digital revolution backed by over 3 decades of experience in helping organizations to transform their operations leveraging on emerging IT infrastructure solutions
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"adopting digital revolution" should be "adopting the digital revolution", but I am not really convinced that one can "adopt" a "revolution" in this sense.
A comma is desirable after "revolution".
It is good style to write small numbers in words.
"leveraging on emerging IT infrastructure solutions" is rather awkwardly attached at the end. It is also not very clear whethe
A comma is desirable after "revolution".
It is good style to write small numbers in words.
"leveraging on emerging IT infrastructure solutions" is rather awkwardly attached at the end. It is also not very clear whethe
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