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Creativeguru Posted 11 years ago
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In our first issue, we have focussed on innovative educational projects undertaken by RCTM and how these initiatives helping education expand and spread their influence in very practical terms. We have empowered a school with Computers; we have transformed a dilapidated school infrastructure into a digital learning hub, and we have also taken up initiatives to build toilets in School. We would like to extend our heartfelt thanks and gratitude for the philanthropic support we received
  

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I can help, but I have some questions. An "issue" could mean a problem that you address, or, like, the first issue of a magazine. Which are you referring to here?

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  • I can help, but I have some questions.
  • An "issue" could mean a problem that you address, or, like, the first issue of a magazine.
  • Which are you referring to here?
  • Next, are you RCTM, or is RCTM a group that you are reporting on?
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I can help, but I have some questions. An "issue" could mean a problem that you address, or, like, the first issue of a magazine. Which are you referring to here?

Next, are you RCTM, or is RCTM a group that you are reporting on?
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Creativeguruinnovative
The word "innovative" is totally clapped out -- overused to the point that it ceases to have any useful meaning. I recommend not using it.
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Unless your "innovative educational projects" are truly innovative. When micro-credit lending first came out, it was a truly innovative way to address poverty. Any brand new method that upends an established convention, any creative, new way to get a long standing thing accomplished is innovative. Innovation is generally how the people of third world countries pull themselves out of centuries o
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1. It is the first issue of our NGO Newsletter

2. RCTM is the name of NGO

Thanks
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Creativeguru In our first issue, we have focused on the innovative educational projects undertaken by RCTM and how these initiatives are helping education expand and spread their influence reach more areas in very practical terms. We have empowered a school with Computers; we have transformed a dilapidated school
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