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Ztq3 Posted 11 years ago
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Is this correct

I am forwarding your e-mail to Jane, our manager. Please send your questions to her regarding XYZ account.

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Dear Kolokoy, It looks fine. You may need a "the" before the name of the account. g.

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  • Dear Kolokoy, It looks fine.
  • You may need a "the" before the name of the account.
  • g.
  • accounts manager, using the title would probably sound more natural.
  • Kind regards, Michael
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Dear Kolokoy, It looks fine. You may need a "the" before the name of the account. If the manager has a title e.g. accounts manager, using the title would probably sound more natural. Kind regards, Michael
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Generally speaking, it is more business-like to refer to Jane as eg Jane Smith.

Clive
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