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Ayan86 Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Is this correct?

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Any mistakes here? Have I written articles correctly?

The plaintiff’s representative states that before and after entering into marriage the spouses lived in Germany, but at the mid-part of 2007 relationship between the spouses worsened.

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If they were together in Deutschland the whole time, you might want to say "lived together in Germany," just to preclude the possibility that although they got married, one lived in Berlin and the other lived in Bonn. " You'll need the definite article "the" before relationship.

  • If they were together in Deutschland the whole time, you might want to say "lived together in Germany," just to preclude the possibility that although they got married, one lived in Berlin and the other lived in Bonn.
  • " You'll need the definite article "the" before relationship.
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If they were together in Deutschland the whole time, you might want to say "lived together in Germany," just to preclude the possibility that although they got married, one lived in Berlin and the other lived in Bonn.

You've got the spouses established as an antecedent in the first clause, so you may refer to them with a pronoun in the second: "the relationship between them worsen

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