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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Letter Writing

Is this correct?

I am writing a business letter to my boss. I am not sure of my grammar since I am not good in English.

Dear Mr. Smith,

Good day!

Please see attached pictures of our new renovated bathroom. ( I want to extend some words but I can't think of any appropriate words. Please suggest one.)

Sincerely yours,
Ms. Jones

Any help will be highly appreciated. Thanks.
  

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Dear Mr. Smith, Good day! <<<< Don't say this in a business letter .

— Clive

  • Dear Mr.
  • Smith, Good day!
  • <<<< Don't say this in a business letter .
  • Please see attached pictures of our newly renovated bathroom.
  • Say why you are sending these to him.
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Dear Mr. Smith,

Good day!<<<< Don't say this in a business letter.

Please see attached pictures of our newly renovated bathroom. Say why you are sending these to him.

Sincerely yours,
Mary Jones
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