0
Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Is this correct?

Hi!

Is my sentence correct?

The respondent has submitted a request to the German police and currently waits for an answer which would prove that the applicant has been physically and psychologically violent towards the respondent causing suffering also to the child, John Smith.

Thank you!
  

Top answer

The respondent has submitted a request to the German police and is awaiting a response proving that the applicant has been physically and psychologically violent towards the respondent, causing suffering also to the child, John Smith.

  • The respondent has submitted a request to the German police and is awaiting a response proving that the applicant has been physically and psychologically violent towards the respondent, causing suffering also to the child, John Smith.
Free · every Monday

Get the Weekly English Kit 📬

New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.

1 Answers
0
The respondent has submitted a request to the German police and is awaiting a response proving that the applicant has been physically and psychologically violent towards the respondent, causing suffering also to the child, John Smith.

Related Questions