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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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Is this correct?

Is this correct?
I love to shoot weddings because of the emotions that are concentrated in one day and shared by all the people.

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Hi, "concentrated" is not a proper word choice for that context. Let's rewrite it as follows; I love to shoot wedding photos because of the strong emotions shared by family and friends. Hamid

— Hrsanei

  • Hi, "concentrated" is not a proper word choice for that context.
  • Let's rewrite it as follows; I love to shoot wedding photos because of the strong emotions shared by family and friends.
  • Hamid
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Hi,
"concentrated" is not a proper word choice for that context.
Let's rewrite it as follows;

I love to shoot wedding photos because of the strong emotions shared by family and friends.

Hamid
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