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Boomkack Posted 12 years ago
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"She gave him that beautiful painting she did when her manager fired her, as a thank for making her find the light" i feel like i did a lot of mistakes in this sentence, can you help me perfect it please? thanks!
  

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She gave him that beautiful painting she did when her manager fired her, as a thank-you for helping her find the light.

  • She gave him that beautiful painting she did when her manager fired her, as a thank-you for helping her find the light.
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She gave him that beautiful painting she did when her manager fired her, as a thank-you for helping her find the light.

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