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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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This new methodology is based on the experience of scientists and field specialists using several other tests.

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Anonymous This new methodology is based on the experience of scientists and field specialists using several other tests. Good, but the ending is faulty ( using several other tests ). It sounds vague and incomplete.

— CalifJim

  • Anonymous This new methodology is based on the experience of scientists and field specialists using several other tests.
  • Good, but the ending is faulty ( using several other tests ).
  • It sounds vague and incomplete.
  • Maybe you could give some explanation of what the tests were, who used several other tests to ...
  • Or you could just stop after specialists and write another sentence about the tests.
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AnonymousThis new methodology is based on the experience of scientists and field specialists using several other tests.
Good, but the ending is faulty (using several other tests). It sounds vague and incomplete. Maybe you could give some explanation of what the tests were, who used several other tests to .... Or you could just stop after spe
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