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IONE7WORLD Posted 12 years ago
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Our love was so strong that gave us one more last chance that we still did not take.
  

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Our love was so strong that it gave us one more last chance that we still did not take. But I would make more than one sentence. It is awkward as is.

— AlpheccaStars

  • Our love was so strong that it gave us one more last chance that we still did not take.
  • But I would make more than one sentence.
  • It is awkward as is.
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Our love was so strong that it gave us one more last chance that we still did not take.

But I would make more than one sentence. It is awkward as is.
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IONE7WORLDOur love was so strong that it gave us one more last chance.
So far, so good (as corrected), but how does strong love lead to not taking the last chance that was given? Our love was so strong that we refused to take a chance? I don't understand what you're saying. It seems rather contradictory, or at least oddly
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