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Eventually, the windsoul genasi Marod el Arhapan became the Pasha of Calimport, but his passion was on staging gladiatorial games in the arena that his family had rebuilt after the departure of Calim instead of actually ruling the city, which was a duty that was left to his vizar, Shahrokh, a mighty skylord of the djinn.
  

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Eventually, the windsoul genasi Marod el Arhapan became the Pasha of Calimport, but his passion was for staging gladiatorial games in the arena that his family had rebuilt after the Calim's departure instead of governing the city, a duty left to his vizar, Shahrokh, a mighty skylord of the djinn.

  • Eventually, the windsoul genasi Marod el Arhapan became the Pasha of Calimport, but his passion was for staging gladiatorial games in the arena that his family had rebuilt after the Calim's departure instead of governing the city, a duty left to his vizar, Shahrokh, a mighty skylord of the djinn.
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Eventually, the windsoul genasi Marod el Arhapan became the Pasha of Calimport, but his passion was for staging gladiatorial games in the arena that his family had rebuilt after the Calim's departure instead of governing the city, a duty left to his vizar, Shahrokh, a mighty skylord of the djinn.

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