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Devon77 Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

is this correct?

Hello Jim ,

I’m writing you to touch base in order to be on the same page.

You are waiting from me a headshot, a short bio and an article from each author we had discussed.

I get back to you when I have an update within the deadline we have set.

Best regards,

xxxxx
  

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I’m writing you to touch base in order to be on the same page. (This is mixing idioms and sounds like just so much jargon. ) You are waiting from for me to send you a headshot, a short bio and an article from each author we had (the simple past would be better) discussed.

— AlpheccaStars

  • I’m writing you to touch base in order to be on the same page.
  • (This is mixing idioms and sounds like just so much jargon.
  • ) You are waiting from for me to send you a headshot, a short bio and an article from each author we had (the simple past would be better) discussed.
  • I 'll get back to you when I have an update .
  • And that will be within the deadline we have set.
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I’m writing you to touch base in order to be on the same page. (This is mixing idioms and sounds like just so much jargon. Can't you state it in a more straightforward way?)

You are waiting from for me to send you a headshot, a short bio and an article from each author we had (the simple past would be better) discussed.

I'll get bac
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