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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Is this all correct and is it clear that the "he" refers to Alegni? FYI- Previous content shows Alegni is the Shadovar, Barrabus is the assassin.
Alegni instructed Barrabus to convince the lord of the city to change the bridge’s name; however, when Barrabus showed disdain towards the Shadovar, he used his magical sword Charon’s Claw to punish the assassin.
Alegni instructed Barrabus to convince the lord of the city to change the bridge’s name; however, when Barrabus showed disdain towards the Shadovar, he used his magical sword Charon’s Claw to punish the assassin.
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cboutin3 Is this all correct and is it clear that the "he" refers to Alegni? On the contrary, it is clear that it refers to Barrabus. By the time the reader gets to "assassin", it's too late.
- cboutin3 Is this all correct and is it clear that the "he" refers to Alegni?
- On the contrary, it is clear that it refers to Barrabus.
- By the time the reader gets to "assassin", it's too late.
- Also, the two parts of the sentence seem unrelated.
- When you use a semicolon, the second part must expand upon the first part.
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cboutin3Is this all correct and is it clear that the "he" refers to Alegni?On the contrary, it is clear that it refers to Barrabus. By the time the reader gets to "assassin", it's too late. Also, the two parts of the sentence seem unrelated. When you use a semicolon, the second part must expand upon the first part.
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