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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
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In order to be able to achieve this and forge ahead, can you please kindly furnish us with details and highlight which parts of our proposal you found to be resource demanding?
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Professional writing requires concise and succint writing. Too world! In order to achieve this and forge ahead, kindly furnish us with details and highlight the parts of our proposal where you deem the resource required demanding.
- Professional writing requires concise and succint writing.
- Too world!
- In order to achieve this and forge ahead, kindly furnish us with details and highlight the parts of our proposal where you deem the resource required demanding.
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Professional writing requires concise and succint writing. Too world!
In order to achieve this and forge ahead, kindly furnish us with details and highlight the parts of our proposal where you deem the resource required demanding.
In order to achieve this and forge ahead, kindly furnish us with details and highlight the parts of our proposal where you deem the resource required demanding.
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AwenceProfessional writing requires concise and succint writing. Too world!In order to achieve this and forge ahead, kindly furnish us with details and highlight the parts of our proposal where you deem the resource required demanding.No, no, no!! That is worse than the original. It is not grammatically sound, either.
I agree that professional writing r
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Maybe something like this:
In order to be able to achieve our goals and make progress, please highlight those aspects of our proposal you found to be too resource demanding. We appreciate your detailed and constructive feedback.
In order to be able to achieve our goals and make progress, please highlight those aspects of our proposal you found to be too resource demanding. We appreciate your detailed and constructive feedback.
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agree... I did not really refine it.. like your version.. too quick a glance.
typo: wordy not worldly.
My suggested version,
In order to achieve our goal and progress, please highlight the aspects of our proposals that demand excessive resource.
typo: wordy not worldly.
My suggested version,
In order to achieve our goal and progress, please highlight the aspects of our proposals that demand excessive resource.
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