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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
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By the time I'd collected my stuff from my apartment, and found parking in the lot underneath the mall my mood had once again, turned heavy with thoughts of Seth. Sometimes my job got under my skin; Seth was irreplaceable, it was such a waste. I knew I was going to feel it, more keenly, when the reality of his death hit me. I was still expecting to see him coming around every corner with his unique big-toothed grin. Just thinking about him made me feel like the loneliest guy on the planet.
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I have underlined your punctuation problems. Please fix them and post your revised text here. By the time I'd collected my stuff from my apartme nt, an d found parking in the lot underneath the m all m y mood had once aga in, tu rned heavy with thoughts of Seth.
- I have underlined your punctuation problems.
- Please fix them and post your revised text here.
- By the time I'd collected my stuff from my apartme nt, an d found parking in the lot underneath the m all m y mood had once aga in, tu rned heavy with thoughts of Seth.
- Sometimes my job got under my ski n; S eth was irreplaceab le, it was such a waste.
- I knew I was going to feel it, m ore keen ly, wh en the reality of his death hit me.
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I have underlined your punctuation problems. Please fix them and post your revised text here.
By the time I'd collected my stuff from my apartment, and found parking in the lot underneath the mall my mood had once again, turned heavy with thoughts of Seth. Sometimes my job got under my skin; Seth was irreplaceable, it was such a waste. I knew I w
By the time I'd collected my stuff from my apartment, and found parking in the lot underneath the mall my mood had once again, turned heavy with thoughts of Seth. Sometimes my job got under my skin; Seth was irreplaceable, it was such a waste. I knew I w
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