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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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Indeed it is a great moment in history now and I very much feel like back in the eighties during the upheaval in my part of the world when the only reality we had known was crumbling.
  

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Anonymous Indeed it is a great moment in history now and I very much feel like back in the eighties during the upheaval in my part of the world when the only reality we had known was crumbling. I think it reads very well. It's quite a trick to handle such a long sentence with so many time shifts.

  • Anonymous Indeed it is a great moment in history now and I very much feel like back in the eighties during the upheaval in my part of the world when the only reality we had known was crumbling.
  • I think it reads very well.
  • It's quite a trick to handle such a long sentence with so many time shifts.
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AnonymousIndeed it is a great moment in history now and I very much feel like back in the eighties during the upheaval in my part of the world when the only reality we had known was crumbling.
I think it reads very well.

It's quite a trick to handle such a long sentence with so many time shifts.

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