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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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The Kite Runner, by Khaled Hosseini, tells the story of two best friends who lead antithetical lives: Amir and Hassan.
  

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Hi, The Kite Runner, by Khaled Hosseini, tells the story of two best friends who lead antithetical lives: Amir and Hassan. I'd write it this way. 'The Kite Runner', by Khaled Hosseini, tells the story of two best friends, Amir and Hussan, who lead antithetical lives.

  • Hi, The Kite Runner, by Khaled Hosseini, tells the story of two best friends who lead antithetical lives: Amir and Hassan.
  • I'd write it this way.
  • 'The Kite Runner', by Khaled Hosseini, tells the story of two best friends, Amir and Hussan, who lead antithetical lives.
  • I'd also consider omitting the first two commas.
  • Best wishes, Clive
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Hi,

The Kite Runner, by Khaled Hosseini, tells the story of two best friends who lead antithetical lives: Amir and Hassan.

I'd write it this way.

'The Kite Runner', by Khaled Hosseini, tells the story of two best friends, Amir and Hussan, who lead antithetical lives.



I'd also consider omitting the first two commas.

Best wishes, Clive

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