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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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Is this correct?
I have decided to take the journey of my life to improve human health, and the start at your esteemed university would be a milestone.
I'm not good at English, so I wonder if the sentence above is correct.
If it sounds awkward, please help me revise it.
Thanks a lot.
I'm not good at English, so I wonder if the sentence above is correct.
If it sounds awkward, please help me revise it.
Thanks a lot.
Top answer
Too flowery. Do this: I would like to study Health Sciences at the University of [ name ].
- Too flowery.
- Do this: I would like to study Health Sciences at the University of [ name ].
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Too flowery. Do this:
I would like to study Health Sciences at the University of [name].
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Too flowery. Do this:
I would like to study Health Sciences at the University of [name].
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