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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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Is this correct?

Could you please revise this sentence?

When writing this part of the thesis I was inspired by my own experience from my stay in Scotland and I also used several guide-books published in renowned editions, such as Rough Guides or Michelin.

Thanks a lot.
  

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Hi, Could you please revise this sentence? When writing this part of the thesis I was inspired by my own experience from my stay in Scotland and I also used several guide-books published in renowned editions, such as Rough Guides or Michelin. When writing this part of the thesis, I was inspired by my own experience from my stay in Scotland.

— Clive

  • Hi, Could you please revise this sentence?
  • When writing this part of the thesis I was inspired by my own experience from my stay in Scotland and I also used several guide-books published in renowned editions, such as Rough Guides or Michelin.
  • When writing this part of the thesis, I was inspired by my own experience from my stay in Scotland.
  • I also used several well-known guide-books, such as Rough Guides and Michelin.
  • Best wishes, Clive
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Hi,
Could you please revise this sentence?

When writing this part of the thesis I was inspired by my own experience from my stay in Scotland and I also used several guide-books published in renowned editions, such as Rough Guides or Michelin.

When writing this part of the thesis, I was inspired by my own experience from my stay in Scotland. I also used several well
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Thanks a million, Clive ;-)
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