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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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Is this correct?

Hi all.

Could this please be checked over? i lack confidence in my skills, and so any corrections are welcome, so long as they're explained Emotion: smile.

"been out today. Horrah! Whats worth noting are the behaviours i observed in the betting office - both in myself, and my parents; especially my mother.

Both of them jumped on the virtual roulette machine, while i just sat, trying to reacquaint myself to the enviroment. It wasn't busy, which was no surprise at the hour, but i was still uncomfortable, and even now, i've no idea why. To deal with these feelings, i'd try and imagine that i was sitting at home, and then i found myself asking; "what is home?"

Thank you again, it is very much appreciated. I envy you people XD.
  

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Hi, Could this please be checked over? i lack confidence in my skills, and so any corrections are welcome, so long as they're explained . "been out today.

— Clive

  • Hi, Could this please be checked over?
  • i lack confidence in my skills, and so any corrections are welcome, so long as they're explained .
  • "been out today.
  • Horrah!
  • Whats worth noting are the behaviours i observed in the betting office - both in myself, and my parents; especially my mother.
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Hi,
Could this please be checked over? i lack confidence in my skills, and so any corrections are welcome, so long as they're explained
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CliveRather that explaining everything, I suggest you just ask a question about any edits you don't understand.

I think you write quite well. In an interesting way, I mean.

Best wishes,Clive

Thank you Clive, it helps
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