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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
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Is this correct ?

We still waiting for your payment of USDxxx. We could not afford your holding up the payment for two months, which the goods were shipped in first week of August. Please make immediate payment, and advise us of the settlement date.
  

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We require your immediate payment of ***. Your payment is now two months overdue for the goods shipped first week of August. Please advise us of the settlement date.

— BarbaraPA

  • We require your immediate payment of ***.
  • Your payment is now two months overdue for the goods shipped first week of August.
  • Please advise us of the settlement date.
  • (I made it a little more firm.
  • There's no need to say what you can afford...
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We require your immediate payment of ***. Your payment is now two months overdue for the goods shipped first week of August. Please advise us of the settlement date.

(I made it a little more firm. There's no need to say what you can afford... just say he hasn't paid!)
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Hi GG, Yes, that's succinct. Thanks
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