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00Can you tell me if the following article is correct in grammar and if it flows please?01blockquote

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10So you're staring at that girl that you have been trying to work up the confidence to talk to for months but didn't know what to say. I know you want it to be absolutely perfect so this article will guide you through what to do and how to do it.12br
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10Stroll across to the girl of your choice, smile and tell her what your name is and ask her how she is. For example "Hi, my names Steve, how are you?". Hopefully she will reply, if not just walk away and forget about it. Things like this happen to the best of us. However she might say something like "Yeah I'm fine, my names Fiona". Now the conversation has started don't let it die. You should always keep eye contact with a girl and never glance down at her breasts no matter how much you want to. She will think you are looking for an easy shag, the most likely outcome of that will be a slap. Remember to be considerate and not to forward, however she does not want you to be afraid of her.12br
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10Now, this is what you say next. Girls absolutely love to talk and you should let them! Ask her what shes interested in, what her days been like, ask her what music she listens to. Also compliment her eyes, makeup and what she is wearing. Do not compliment on her breasts, bum or any other area like that. Its insensitive to a girl even if you mean well. She may ask you a question, answer it truthfully. Girls don't want a guy that's not himself.12br
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10That concludes this part of the handbook. I hope this has helped you in your quest of finding the right girl. Just remember to be yourself and not someone you're not. It will fall back on you in the end.12br
10Thank you, I really would appreciate this. 12br
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10Haydn Walker12br
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