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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Is this completely correct, particularly the colon use?

A few races survived on the carnage the Blood War produced: the armanites (centaur-like tanar'ri) had to constantly battle with other creatures, for otherwise they would turn on one another; the molydei were another race of demons who prowled the Abyss, searching for deserters or rogue demons, whom they press-ganged into fighting.
  

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The semicolon is correct, but I would place it elsewhere. A few races survived on the carnage the Blood War produced: the armanites (centaur-like tanar'ri) constantly battled with other c reatures; otherwise they would turn on one anot her. The molydei were another race of demons who prowled the Abyss, searching for deserters or rogue demons whom they press-ganged into combat.

  • The semicolon is correct, but I would place it elsewhere.
  • A few races survived on the carnage the Blood War produced: the armanites (centaur-like tanar'ri) constantly battled with other c reatures; otherwise they would turn on one anot her.
  • The molydei were another race of demons who prowled the Abyss, searching for deserters or rogue demons whom they press-ganged into combat.
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The semicolon is correct, but I would place it elsewhere.

A few races survived on the carnage the Blood War produced: the armanites (centaur-like tanar'ri) constantly battled with other creatures; otherwise they would turn on one another. The molydei were another race of demons who prowled the Abyss, searching for deserters or rogue demons whom they press-g

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