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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Is this completely correct and should I add the statement in parenthses?

At the conclusion of the War of Souls, Paladine sacrificed his immortality in order to strip Takhisis of her divinity, and the Dark Queen was then slain by the Silvanesti king Silvanoshei Caladon. But, most important to the Orders of High Sorcery, the three moons once more returned to the skies over Krynn, which meant the return of the gods of magic and High Sorcery. Dalamar was tasked with the difficult duty of reforming the Orders of High Sorcery, (but it was) a responsibility he readily accepted.
  

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At the conclusion of the War of Souls, Paladine sacrificed his immortality in order to strip Takhisis of her divinity, and the Dark Queen was then slain by the Silvanesti king Silvanoshei Caladon. But, most important to the Orders of High Sorcery, the three moons once more returned to the skies over Krynn, signalling the return of the gods of magic and High Sorcery. Dalamar was tasked with the difficult reform of the Orders of High Sorce ry, a re sponsibility he nevertheless readily accepted.

— Mister Micawber

  • At the conclusion of the War of Souls, Paladine sacrificed his immortality in order to strip Takhisis of her divinity, and the Dark Queen was then slain by the Silvanesti king Silvanoshei Caladon.
  • But, most important to the Orders of High Sorcery, the three moons once more returned to the skies over Krynn, signalling the return of the gods of magic and High Sorcery.
  • Dalamar was tasked with the difficult reform of the Orders of High Sorce ry, a re sponsibility he nevertheless readily accepted.
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At the conclusion of the War of Souls, Paladine sacrificed his immortality in order to strip Takhisis of her divinity, and the Dark Queen was then slain by the Silvanesti king Silvanoshei Caladon. But, most important to the Orders of High Sorcery, the three moons once more returned to the skies over Krynn, signalling the return of the gods of magic and High Sorcery. Dalamar was tasked wi
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Thanks so much for all your help. Would this option work for the last sentence? Dalamar was given the difficult duty of reforming the Orders of High Sorcery, a responsibility he nevertheless readily accepted.
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Yes, that is fine. I am glad that you recognize that 'task' = 'duty'.
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