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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Is this completely correct and do I need the second "that"?

Tol ordered that the surviving Wolves be immediately executed and that there heads be placed within one of the delegation’s wagons.
  

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I'd revise it to read: Tol ordered that the surviving Wolves be immediately executed and that their heads be placed inside one of the delegation's wagons.

— Barbara Nast

  • I'd revise it to read: Tol ordered that the surviving Wolves be immediately executed and that their heads be placed inside one of the delegation's wagons.
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I'd revise it to read: Tol ordered that the surviving Wolves be immediately executed and that their heads be placed inside one of the delegation's wagons.
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