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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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When she arrived at the house, Zala discovered the captive to be Tylocost, who had been Tol’s prisoner for the last sixteen years. Tylocost agreed to help Zala find Tol only if the huntress would take him out of Juramona before the nomads sacked the town, a bargain that Zala reluctantly accepted. Despite Tol’s decision to remain in the Great Green, Egrin lingered in the Dom-shu village, hoping to convince Tol to change his mind.
  

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When she arrived at the house, Zala discovered the captive to be Tylocost, Tol’s prisoner for the last sixteen years. Tylocost agreed to help Zala find Tol only if the huntress would take him away from Juramona before the nomads sacked the town, a bargain that Zala reluctantly accepted. Despite Tol’s decision to remain in the Great Green, Egrin lingered in the Dom-shu village, hoping to convince Tol to change his mind.

  • When she arrived at the house, Zala discovered the captive to be Tylocost, Tol’s prisoner for the last sixteen years.
  • Tylocost agreed to help Zala find Tol only if the huntress would take him away from Juramona before the nomads sacked the town, a bargain that Zala reluctantly accepted.
  • Despite Tol’s decision to remain in the Great Green, Egrin lingered in the Dom-shu village, hoping to convince Tol to change his mind.
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When she arrived at the house, Zala discovered the captive to be Tylocost, Tol’s prisoner for the last sixteen years. Tylocost agreed to help Zala find Tol only if the huntress would take him away from Juramona before the nomads sacked the town, a bargain that Zala reluctantly accepted. Despite Tol’s decision to remain in the Great Green, Egrin lingered in the Dom-shu village, hoping to convinc

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