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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Outside of Flotsam, Chemosh appeared to the group and tried to convince Mina to come with him, but she refused. Zeboim then appeared and defended Mina and her friends, and told Mina that she could use her powers to transport them all to the town of Solace, where they could gain further directions on the precise location of Godshome. Both gods disappeared, and Mina used her powers to make the group walk at an incredibly high speed so that they were able to travel from Flotsam to Solace in a single day.
  

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Outside of Flotsam, Chemosh appeared to them and tried to convince Mina to accompany him, but she refused. Zeboim then appeared and defended Mina and her friends , telling Mina that she could use her powers to transport them all to the town of Solace, where they could ascertain the precise location of Godshome. Both gods disappeared, and Mina caused the group to walk at an incredibly high speed , travelling from Flotsam to Solace in a single day.

— Mister Micawber

  • Outside of Flotsam, Chemosh appeared to them and tried to convince Mina to accompany him, but she refused.
  • Zeboim then appeared and defended Mina and her friends , telling Mina that she could use her powers to transport them all to the town of Solace, where they could ascertain the precise location of Godshome.
  • Both gods disappeared, and Mina caused the group to walk at an incredibly high speed , travelling from Flotsam to Solace in a single day.
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Outside of Flotsam, Chemosh appeared to them and tried to convince Mina to accompany him, but she refused. Zeboim then appeared and defended Mina and her friends, telling Mina that she could use her powers to transport them all to the town of Solace, where they could ascertain the precise location of Godshome. Both gods disappeared, and Mina caused the group to
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Thanks. Would this option work for the last sentence? Both gods disappeared, and Mina used her powers to cause the group to walk at an incredibly high speed, allowing/enabling them to travel from Flotsam to Solace in a single day.
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cboutin3Would this option work for the last sentence?
It is clumsier.
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