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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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As a reward, Lanther took Linsha to a ceremony in the lower levels of the palace, where she was officially betrothed to the warlord. While in the underground cavern, she discovered the presence of a young brass dragon named Sirenfal, who had been captured and tortured by the Keena priests among the Tarmaks.
  

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As a reward, Lanther took Linsha to a ceremony in the palace cellars, where she w as betrothed to the warlord. While in the underground cavern, she discovered a young brass dragon named Sirenfal, who had been captured and tortured by the Keena priests among the Tarmaks.

  • As a reward, Lanther took Linsha to a ceremony in the palace cellars, where she w as betrothed to the warlord.
  • While in the underground cavern, she discovered a young brass dragon named Sirenfal, who had been captured and tortured by the Keena priests among the Tarmaks.
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As a reward, Lanther took Linsha to a ceremony in the palace cellars, where she was betrothed to the warlord. While in the underground cavern, she discovered a young brass dragon named Sirenfal, who had been captured and tortured by the Keena priests among the Tarmaks.

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