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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Is this completely correct?
By shortly after the War of the Lance, Par-Salian was known to have appeared as a frail and elderly man in his seventies, who had long wispy white hair, a long white beard, and bright blue eyes.
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Hi That sounds OK, though the first three words don't seem quite right. ' Dave
- Hi That sounds OK, though the first three words don't seem quite right.
- ' Dave
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Hi
That sounds OK, though the first three words don't seem quite right.
I think I might drop the word 'by' at the beginning and just say 'Shortly after the War ...'; or you could use 'Not long after the War ...'
Dave
That sounds OK, though the first three words don't seem quite right.
I think I might drop the word 'by' at the beginning and just say 'Shortly after the War ...'; or you could use 'Not long after the War ...'
Dave
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