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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Sergen also had Umbryl secretly kill the orc emissaries and bring their heads to Bloodskull Keep in order to ignite a war between Thar and Hulburg, which was a threat that Sergen envisioned would be the perfect opportunity to launch his plan against the true Hulmasters.
  

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) against the true Hulmasters.

  • ) against the true Hulmasters.
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Sergen also had Umbryl assassinate the orc emissaries and bring their heads to Bloodskull Keep in order to ignite a war between Thar and Hulburg, a threat that Sergen envisioned would be the perfect opportunity to launch his offensive (?) against the true Hulmasters.
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Thanks for your help. Does this sound better?

Sergen also had Umbryl assassinate the orc emissaries and bring their heads to Bloodskull Keep in order to ignite a war between Thar and Hulburg, a threat that Sergen envisioned would be the perfect opportunity to launch his plan to kill the true Hulmasters.

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