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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Geran then used the gift from Aesperus to turn the skeletal soldiers on Mhurren’s forces, however, when the sun rose, the amulet crumbled and the undead disappeared, which gave the horde the opportunity to once again attack the Hulburgans. Since his plans to seize power were ruined, Sergen retreated from the battle at that time along with all of the soldiers of House Veruna.
  

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Geran then used the gift from Aesperus to turn the skeletal soldiers on Mhurren’s force s; however, when the sun rose, the amulet crumbled and the undead disappeared, giving the horde another opportunity to attack the Hulburgans. His plans to seize power ruined , Sergen then retreated from the battle with all of the soldiers of House Veruna.

  • Geran then used the gift from Aesperus to turn the skeletal soldiers on Mhurren’s force s; however, when the sun rose, the amulet crumbled and the undead disappeared, giving the horde another opportunity to attack the Hulburgans.
  • His plans to seize power ruined , Sergen then retreated from the battle with all of the soldiers of House Veruna.
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Geran then used the gift from Aesperus to turn the skeletal soldiers on Mhurren’s forces; however, when the sun rose, the amulet crumbled and the undead disappeared, giving the horde another opportunity to attack the Hulburgans. His plans to seize power ruined, Sergen then retreated from the battle with all of the soldiers of House Veruna.

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