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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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While the primordial began to shake off the water elementals since the magic that was binding it was shut down entirely, Sylora opened another portal through which she, Dor'crae, Valindra, and most of the Ashmadai were able to leave the city.
  

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While the primordial began to shake off the water elementals after the magic binding it was undone, Sylora opened another portal through which she, Dor'crae, Valindra, and most of the Ashmadai were able to leave the city.

  • While the primordial began to shake off the water elementals after the magic binding it was undone, Sylora opened another portal through which she, Dor'crae, Valindra, and most of the Ashmadai were able to leave the city.
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While the primordial began to shake off the water elementals after the magic binding it was undone, Sylora opened another portal through which she, Dor'crae, Valindra, and most of the Ashmadai were able to leave the city.

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