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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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During the march to the fortress, Vinas’s armies battled an enemy force at a location along the Vingaard River known as the Crossing.
  

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During their march to the fortress, Vinas’s armies battled an enemy force at The Crossing, on the Vingaard River.

  • During their march to the fortress, Vinas’s armies battled an enemy force at The Crossing, on the Vingaard River.
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During their march to the fortress, Vinas’s armies battled an enemy force at The Crossing, on the Vingaard River.

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