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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Kitiara left home around the same time as Raistlin joined Theobald’s mage academy, but she would periodically return home with small gifts for Caramon, such as a sword, and would instruct him in its use as he grew older.
  

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Kitiara left home around the same time as Raistlin joined Theobald’s mage academy, but she would periodically return home with small gifts for Caramon, such as a sword, and would instruct him in their use as he grew older.

— Mister Micawber

  • Kitiara left home around the same time as Raistlin joined Theobald’s mage academy, but she would periodically return home with small gifts for Caramon, such as a sword, and would instruct him in their use as he grew older.
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Kitiara left home around the same time as Raistlin joined Theobald’s mage academy, but she would periodically return home with small gifts for Caramon, such as a sword, and would instruct him in their use as he grew older.
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Well with what I'm trying to say, would one of these options be a better sentence? Kitiara left home around the same time as Raistlin joined Theobald’s mage academy, but she would periodically return home with small gifts for Caramon, such as a sword (, which, that) she taught him to use as he grew older.
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Kitiara left home around the same time as Raistlin joined Theobald’s mage academy, but she would periodically return home with small gifts for Caramon, such as a sword that she taught him to use as he grew older.
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